I don’t like to complain (much) but I had my Light and Shade sketchbook marked.
I’ll let the spelling of my name wrong go for the time being since that would just be a bit picky but I asked about the style of the sketchbook many times because I was concerned about the amateurish look to it, it’s meant to be disjointed to represent my lack of knowledge with regards to photography, thats why it got better towards the end. I know that it is my failing with not making enough referencing and I don’t doubt about the blurring because of that but I’ll have to get the book back to see where this is evident.
There isn’t much more to say about this really since the feedback above is all the written feedback I have from four months work, that equals one sentence per month and three of those say essentially the same thing. With such a low mark I would expect to have much more, I’m sure that by changing the two points made I wouldn’t get very much more in the way of marks. Oh, am I being just a bit picky?
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Just a quick note to say that my teacher added on my college file that the work produced was a good start to tphotography so thank you for that. I hope to be able to ask about the areas to improve although I get the general idea.