Essay for 25 Marks?
I had my essay back today the 30 Mark Question and received 25 points which gave me an A. course this is good but I reckon that it must only just have been an A. I’ve some points for improvement on this one too which is a great thing for me, looking at why I didn’t get more marks. On the essay linked above, I could improve by using a wider perspective, which is ok since I’ve been trying to make it narrow thinking this was the way to go for me. I still think I should continue to be narrow because I am thinking of that ‘golden moment’ or some sort of breakthrough in philosophy but I will take it on board especially since if that comes at all I dount it will be at A Level, although what a place to be able to build from. The other area for improvement is that I could have expanded on the the thought that in religion morality is more than a social contract.
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